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howl

surrounded
northeast winds howl
tempestuous rage

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  • Malabu
    February 2

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    surrounded
    northeast head winds howl
    tempestuous rage

    i thought removing head gives it more stength

    surrounded
    northeast winds howl

    tempestuous rage

    i like this though
    thanks for your entry


    • Draig aine gold member
      February 2
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      hm

      you must not live on the edge of the world, a head wind hits you directly, obliterating all in its path, pushing you back or were you making a joke?

      • Malabu
        February 2
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        i live in new jersey, and experience every season
        head; was not nesessary though i understood your thought
        im sorry you feel insulted

        i did like your ku ...it was good!
        as i said


  • DogFish silver member
    January 17
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    fierce !


  • penman gold member
    January 6
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    Wonderful

    Terrific haiku. Best of luck in the contest.

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