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first,
it was the eyes--

as wide
and clear as oceans,
gold rings
circling their bottoms.
after centuries
of waiting,
a flood of lotus flowers
rose to the water's surface
and all that lay before me,
I could not touch.

and all that lay above me,
required bodily
severing.
even I
sometimes know
what I want,
but my hesitance
watched every offering
withdraw.
and after all
the golden palms
were gone,
the words
climbed
out:


no,
I don't have
any doubts

Author notes

I was halfway, it should have been easy

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