I just said: you're all I [have], but
… … t h a t
is all I have to
[lose].
|read|between||the| |l|i|n|e|s||
::we're.::.falling.::.a p a r t
ch-o-king on apologies && tripping on blame, in bed in the dark, placing LSD dots of guilt on each other's tongues
**{how's}{that}{for}{a}{bad}{trip}**
stopstopstop the |f|l|a|s|h|b|a|c|k|s|
my //regressions//
your \\obsessions\\
my //regrets//
your \\discontents\\
bby I know it's all you want ;;
all you ever w.a.n.t.e.d.,
and all I ever w.a.s.
but silicone lips && purpled hips && carved "whore" wrists can lie. && I lie to myself every time I believe in x x fairy tales x x.
I told you I was n a i v e as a child;; you said you didn't mind;;
you loved my innocence all to shreds,
&& I'm caught spiraling
d
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w
n
w
a
r
d
s
into my [[failures]], your [[fantasies]], and all my (call them morals or call them immaturities) you call my [[fuckup]] flaws,
just because I'm not ready to sell myself to you yet, pressed against the nearest bed.
You swore to give me happiness
I promised to give you everything
You vowed to give me a choice
And I said I'd give it [all] up
{{if.you.know.what.i.mean}}
&& four cuts, eight letters, & ten advil later, we're back where we started again
<3
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Alright, so I've always liked dirty pretty.
But you, you bring a new meaning to it.
Hotdamn if I'm not in love with your writing.
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i love the emotion you put into this, even as i'm sorry you had to feel that way
this is absolutely brilliantly written -
Awww, this was beautifully written! The emotion was intense and I love the metaphors/images you used to portray such feelings. These lines perfectly describe my most recent relationship:
*into my [[failures]], your [[fantasies]], and all my (call them morals or call them immaturities) you call my [[fuckup]] flaws,
just because I'm not ready to sell myself to you yet, pressed against the nearest bed.
You swore to give me happiness
I promised to give you everything
You vowed to give me a choice
And I said I'd give it [all] up*
WOW. Amazingly powerful words and you took all my thoughts and penned them wonderfully.
Thank you for sharing this<3
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i love this, it's really really pretty, in that messed up kinda way.
although, the last line was mega mega sad
hope you're okie
♥
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Dude if this poem were a person I would marry it! haha.... ima sketch! I loved it!
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sex. but the pinkness hurt my eyes.
>.<
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i liked this very much, which is strange bcoz this isnt normally what i like, but it was quirky and different, and used very good imagery.
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