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Responsible Fate

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An ancient philosophers noted:
"It is said that humans are more miserable then donkeys,
because we at least are responsible for our own fate"
But, I wonder if that truth still applies.
Man and beast are both driven by necessity and want.
Time seems to have spiraled out of control.
Instinctively we move at such a pace,
that the attitudes of solitude and contemplation are lost.
  Unless we make a concentrated effort to slow down.
we will loose all perspective,
random acts appear to outnumber thoughtful actions.
Do we then carry diminished responsibility for our acts,
perhaps, perhaps not.
Yet I believe in order to remain human,
we must own our actions.
If  not, I fear for our humanity.
 
And the donkey treads the world in its measured pace,
unmoved by the rat race we untertake

 

Author notes

Book the Wisdom of Donkeys by Andy Merrifield, could not use one word because the phrase is so great, picture photobucket. this is a work in progress, yhe contest opened a door that will not shut

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  • penman gold member
    January 12
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and unique. Thank you for sharing.


  • Swan song gold member
    January 9
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    I think it depends on the human and the donkey but i like where ypou went with this

    • Draig aine gold member
      January 9
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      off on a tagent as usual

      my thanks my friend, I think it depends on the Donkey perhaps

  • Wonderment ...

    in this write! Very insightful. I especially liked the way you tied everything together in the last line:

    And the donkey treads the world in its measured pace,
    unmoved by the rat race we [untertake] Oops...caught a typo here. I'm trying to type as my eyes are closing! Took my bed meds. Fine write here.

    • Draig aine gold member
      January 6
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      My humble thanksr

      this is a great book, if you can find it i know you would enjoy


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 6

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    hhmmm..

    this is a definate food for thought piece for me..i like the observation of man and his tendencies throughout life..very good study of 'man' and his character..

    • Draig aine gold member
      January 6
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      thanks for the heads up

      typing in the dark again love you

      Annie

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