I’ll never forget all you’ve done for me,
how you’ve helped me grow and set me free
to be the person I never knew I could be.
You taught me to love unconditionally,
to look past the imperfections and see
the wonderful person I know you to be.
The past three years have certainly been a ride.
I’ve been up and down and thrown side to side.
I’ve fought with my heart and battled my mind,
on whether I should tell you or continue to hide.
But now I’ve found things have changed inside.
After all this time I think I can fin’ly move on.
Somehow letting go of you doesn’t seem all that wrong.
A clean break is easier than a disease prolonged.
I’m tired of waiting hun, it’s just been so long.
I’m happy to say that “just friends” is alright.
That’s all I ever was to you, so I’m not gonna fight.
The future is starting to look really bright.
I’m glad I can keep you in my life, my friend.
I always trusted this would work out in the end.
And for the first time in a long time…. I’m free…
Author notes
oddly enough there are no "end of acts 1-3"..... LOL
embarrasing moment: recently i slipped going down a set of stairs and nearly killed myself, and my slip on shoe flew off and hit somebody in the back.
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Well Done:
Very sweet, and very beautiful. I really liked the introduction. It was pleasant, and it really showed how you introduced your personality and how you are a great appreciative person. Well done.
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The rhyming was near perfect, and the flow was very smooth. Overall, I enjoyed this piece, and nothing too much stood out as wrong. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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I love the rhyming in this! It just sways you on to the next line and next. This is a great poem for people just broken up but really want to be friends. I can relate. My favorite part is,
"After all this time I think I can fin’ly move on.
Somehow letting go of you doesn’t seem all that wrong.
A clean break is easier than a disease prolonged.
I’m tired of waiting hun, it’s just been so long."
Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck!
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tanks so much for the gold!
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Good write, I like the emotion behind it.
Love, Raneika
Thanks for entering!
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Nice
this was very good.
Nicely done!
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You taught me to love unconditionally,
to look past the imperfections and see
the wonderful person I know you to be.
U KNOW U MADE ME CRY FRIEND !!
omg ! what talent !!!
im amazed and speechless....
keep up the good work and thank u for fllwin the rules !!
good luck in the contest !
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Very good!!!! -
really nicely penned...this has a great flow to it ...
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Beautiful piece.
Oh, the rhyme! Well written.
Yes, it feels good to be free.
- Adelaine
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