in your mouth
you fold your paper-thin words up
like origami and grin when they take flight
as paper cranes
hope swelling in the beating of their fragile wings
filling the spaces between us
and bursting in front of my eyes
leaving
drops of happiness trickling down
forming puddles by my feet.
Author notes
3rd poem i wrote that doesnt rhyme.
okay this is for the song sorrow by flyleaf.
random thing.
when i was reading your prompts you had good charlottes song called say anything.
and there is this song called say anything else by cartel.
i havent heard that song in years so when i read the name of that GC song i immedeatly started singing it. and i cant get it out of my head. lol
I CAN TAKE CRITISICM. (ugh i hate that word.) BUT NO MEANIES. JUST KNOW THAT I DONT DO THIS OFTEN. SO IT MAY SUCK A BIT.... okay alot.
IF YOU WANT TO DQ. YOU CAN. I TOTALLY WILL UNDERSTAND. kay?
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very nice write, i enjoyed it a lot. it had a lot of vocabulary and flowed nicely. thanks for entering and good luck.
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A WELL WRITTEN POETRY.
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