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The Sea Beneath My Feet

Standing
            upon jagged rock
watching
            sea waves come inland
crashing
            hard against the wall
mumuring
            a sweet promise of return!

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  • Mariana
    January 6, 2009
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    I like the style and imagery in this poem. All the best to you in the contest

    Mariana


  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 6, 2009
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    thank you for your entry.


  • Hikari Phoenix
    January 6, 2009

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    Pretty sad and deep. The emotions were so vivid. Good imagery, thanks for sharing.

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 5, 2009
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    ah, the ending really wraps up the poem very nicely. great write