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Echoes of Innocence

"Not a dream, not a story.
It's all real, baby I'm sorry."

The scream of a little girl echoing in the night.
Run!
Help!
Who will be the brave knight?
The prince saviour from the fairytales for goodnight.
Screams.
Cynic, isn't it?
Not a single foot closer to the little girl's eyes.
Echoes.
Another tale ends with an unwritten end.

"The world should be a better place..."

Author notes

There really is so much children's abuse these days. I want to make a change in the world and stop it. But we all know, it can't end. Nothing special, just wanted to show my thoughts for the children and the bad things that happen to them.

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  • poeticallyxpathetic
    February 16

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    Wow I really like this, you're a very talented writter..
    I really like this one because child abuse is very important to me and I think there is too many people that just look the other way, so I really like that you are writting about it...

  • Time focus on Me
    February 8
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    Beautiful

    Who will be the brave knight?
    The prince saviour from the fairytales for goodnight.
    Screams.
    Cynic, isn't it?
    Not a single foot closer to the little girl's eyes.
    Echoes.
    Another tale ends with an unwritten end.

    "The world should be a better place..."

    this poem is amazin loved the way it was written n done. Keep da ink flowing.. once again alsome job sis..


  • Silvos. silver member
    January 6

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    I liked this one. I can feel the emotion, especially after reading the author notes and tying it all together. I'm not going to lie, I read this one twice. Very well written.

    Silvos.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    January 6

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    omgosh this is such a thoughtful and meaningful write that came straight from your heart. and the words tug close to my heart strings. its so dearly touching

    AND YAY!!! another poem by you back to the poem... this was impactful, and i hope that people who abuse kids would just stop it, coz it is sooo not fun to see kids cry and suffer no child deserves to be treated that way oh well, some things cant be changed, but heyy we can always try to help

    passionate write, keep penning