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Imagination so fake so real

I need no imagination
Cause it's all here
Right here
Right now
When I need it.

The wings of an angel
The magic of our dreams
Fantasy animals
And wishes coming true.

On this ground
Under, above this sky.
All around us.

The love
And the family
And the friends
The girls
and the guys.

All the imagination we need
All the imagination we have
All the imagination
So fake
So real
So confusing
So it's blowing my mind out.

When i say

So fake
So real
So confusing
So it's blowing my mind out.

You say

WHAT?

You'll fly through this world.
You'll create teh magic.
And all the fantasy animals
And wishes.

All the imagination we need
All the imagination we have
All the imagination
So fake
So real
So confusing
So it's blowing my mind out.

WHAT?

All the imagination
So fake
So real
So confusing
So it's blowing my mind out.

What?

Im gonna say it one more time.

All the imagination
So fake
So real
So confusing
So it's blowing my mind out.

WHAT!

NO!

Author notes

my song and i love it.

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  • sOuL
    August 1

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    Wow this is a very good poem. I like the way you have asked the question. You have made it very nice and struck the point with clear expression.


  • Nicsnowdemon silver member
    March 10
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    Good

    nice


  • DeathlyAngel
    January 7
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    All i can say is very intersteaing, I really like it tho

    Good luck in my contest

  • Impressive

    Well what can I say sweetie your poetry has slowly grown stronger and better with each and every write you have penned and posted as of late. I really enjoyed the penned quality to thisd write from you sweetie and before I hit yuor author's note I had a feleing this was a song as the stanza/'s repeated themselves a sf yity were the chorus. anyw ays all we need now from you sweetie is you up on stage performing yuor song for all to see any ways a very well penned good write from you sweetie and keep up the good work as always and good luck with the contest.

    Tiger


    • kel dog
      January 6
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      thanks for the comment. i liked it. one of the best i actually ever wrote. i hope you all liked it.

      i dont think ill be the one performing the songs i do. i cant sing and i cant get singing practice. not one near me.

      i would like to find just some new band and get them to try it out but here where i am i dont make friends easily.

      though other than that ill keep writingmy sonmgs and poems.

  • Just say no. Just kidding.

    • kel dog
      January 5
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      haha. i like the comment. thanks for the read. haha. thanks.

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