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Fight of Fancy

adrift

afloat in 

disambiguation
incidental meanderings
the slight alteration of minor details
resulting in a myriad of variations on a theme

when serendipitous twists of the tongue
combine to create lyrical cadenzas

arias of such sublime cadence

that angels ecstatically

echo the refrain

Hallelujah

Author notes

just plain strange

A contest entry

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  • myrataal silver member
    January 14

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    Congratulations Anne ...

    on the HM for this wonderful and textured form poem. Well done, Love!

    All the best to you -- and thank you once again for reading me.
    Myra


  • penman gold member
    January 14
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    Congratulations on the honorable mention


  • penman gold member
    January 11
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    Wonderful

    Love the form. Looks great. Best of luck in the contest.


  • azure85 gold member
    January 11

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    This is really cool, a unique use of the prompt. Your poem has a lovely shape and a glorious ending to the thoughts that permeate it throughout each line. Thank you very much!

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