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Gifts...

 

 

 

 

The world became witness to vain ascensions
to ages of empty idols, wasted sacrifice
until a light was born, and men followed
among them the learned and powerful, simply drawn
as if iron shards to the power of the poles.
A bright beacon, a constant gleam, fixed in heavens;
it was a portal to greater possibilities,
people were pulled by need and will
by the mettle of their souls.

The light made a sign upon emptiness;
life was a journey of truth and discovery
guided by a path of creation, a power
in the image of something far greater,
shared for a simple asking...to dare
emulate the gifts of love.

No grudged sifts of reluctant minds
but hearts in flood; forgiveness
not petty resentment, a little pit   
of false words and dim spirit,
but a joyful noise of gratitude.

It passed gently through the world
no violence was uncovered,
no unquiet  from afar
no sounds of distant thunder, not a coming storm;
but the rend-ed upheaval of silent truth,
made plow shears of an eternal sword.
It made calm waters of ever raging seas;
for to simply love and receive love in return,
was as the sun to the night, darkness to light
a difference as the edge of life and stillness.

Emblem of an eternal time, an anchor to hold the soul;
man come to life and end, and a found promise,
a power of love...exceeding all.

 

 

 

 

Author notes

PK


Vapid: lacking in imagination or interest, or devoid of spirit or animation
Lodestar: one who serves as an inspiration or guide
Parsimonious: [parsimony] frugal to the point of stinginess
Calumniate: [calumny] making false statements about a person, intending to hurt their reputation
Brontide: the low rumbling of distant thunder



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  • Cannonsfire
    January 27

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    I wondered who had the gold after reading Cicada's wonderful piece so I came to peek. This is wonderful and congratulations PK C


  • Everwind Rising
    January 13
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    Congratulations on the gold!


  • Ryno
    January 13

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    Wow. You've really created a piece that can be interpreted in so many ways... each way so beautiful and meaningful - at least the ways I've connected to. To me the piece speaks of whatever the "ultimate lodestar" be in our life, to focus on that, to bring something wonderful out of that.

    Your poetic tone was stunning. It felt like an epic piece and an olden piece all modern-ized into one. It was very affective.

    Spiritual, realistic, and true to the heart. Great piece here. Congrats on your Gold, for sure.

  • So many wonderful things here, PK. I am so impressed not only with the vastness of this but also the practical implications. That opening part about the light overcoming vanity, etc. just intrigues me instantly, and I was hanging on every word waiting to read the outcome of this epic tale. I heard myself gasp at this line: "the rend-ed upheaval of silent truth,
    made plow shears of an eternal sword."--what a demonstrative description of ultimate power... I am in awe. And yet, we also get this picture of beautiful gentleness... the combination of the two becomes then a veritable portrait of this entity, indeed.

    This poem is so accessible to many sorts of readers who may come from many perspectives...and all who read here will leave wanting to better understand this emblem, to be rooted with this anchor, to find their beginning and end in this beautiful promise of love.

    You have reached beyond yourself and into those truths that have power to transform. Amazing poetry.


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    January 12

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    This poem is wonderful on so many levels. You were able to combine a number of the prompt words seamlessly and completely. The reader is allowed to extrapolate meaning based on an individual life course as it is both spiritual and secular. The concluding lines are full of hope and leave the reader with a sense of peace. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz


    • Peteskid gold member
      January 12
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      Thank you Liz-
      I enjoyed this, words with some depth and power, to my understanding, a wonderful way to add ideas to a poem. Thank you for the inspiration, the challenge, and the honor...PK


  • ennovy silver member
    January 6

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    Perfection is how I feel your word use...each word in harmony with the next...forming some powerful lines of vivid thoughts....plus as I read it reminded me of our new President....my favorite lines are:

    "A bright beacon, a constant star, fixed in heavens;
    it was a portal to greater possibilities,
    people were pulled by need and will
    by the mettle of their souls."

    Another excellent poem from you PK....I enjoyed this read...Novy


  • Mari Goes gold member
    January 6

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    That light would be a great gift indeed!
    It'd be a wonderful thing if the whole human kind started to see life in that way. You have excellent lines here, and of course, used the words very well.

  • Rowan gold member
    January 6

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    I hate to be redundant again, but this was a stunning read. I love the imagery of iron shards to poles...


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    January 6

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    This is story-like and very interesting. I like the change from your old style Enjoyed reading.

    Laura

  • Simply beautiful, broad-reaching, philosophic truth! I hope to have time to leave a more detailed comment, but this was great!

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