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Autumn Rain

Liquid pours...
... Onto my skin
A kiss of Autumn...

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I used the prompt (Autumn Rain)

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  • Lady Michaella
    January 5

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    ooo
    this is beautiful, i love how you compare the rain to a kiss of autumn.this is exquisite.
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