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Move On

I would part the seas,
Raise the mountains,
Step through time,
Walk through hell
All To get away from you.

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No love, no heartbreak, no fuss, no mess. Just a simple statement.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 6, 2009
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    the last line is not what i expected.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 5, 2009

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    I really liked this...I thought it was going to be a sappy love poem..but you proved me wrong...this is good


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    January 5, 2009
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    ... excellent ...