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autumn,

and dimpled floors
surge with roots

          dying,
      moss, trees.

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5. autumn rain

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  • Jornada
    January 6
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    Autumn rain in nine words--yes--you've got it!


  • Lady Michaella
    January 5
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    oo
    i absolutely love this
    xxx
    written so well
    and its very beautiful.