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Signafies Nothing

When you call to me I follow,
When I call to you you run.
When I kiss your lips you kiss my cheek,
There's a purpose of this shun.
Yet, it signafies nothing.
My heart cannot accept,
The possibility,
That you do not feel,
Like we were meant to be.
Yet, it signafies nothing.
The stars are calling to us,
But you venture away,
My heart is ripping open,
Begging you to stay.
Yet, it signafies nothing.
What will it take,
For my lonesome heart,
To finally let you go?
For signs of uninvolvement,
Are the only signs you show.
Yet it signafies nothing.
But, when I saw you, on that day,
I realized the truth.
For the hardest thing is to watch the one you love,
Love someone else, instead of you.


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  • Leela
    February 25

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    man we all know how this feels all tooo well. a fantastic write on your part, good flow and rhyme. i liked it very much.

    *LEA


  • jbbrandi
    January 8

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    No words to describe it. Another masterpiece. I love it, especially the ending lines (AGAIN! lol!)
    I especially love...
    "For signs of uninvolvement,
    Uncaring, unwanting,
    Are the only signs you show.
    Yet it signafies nothing.
    But, when I saw you, on that day,
    I realized the truth.
    For the hardest thing is to watch the one you love,
    Love someone else, instead of you."
    Yep, that's my favorite part.