I want to walk upon the hills
to stand up tall and feel the thrills
I want to swim in the open sea
naked for all the world to see
I want to stand without a care
to feel a breeze run through my hair
I want to see the world unite
to stand as one without a fight
I want to hold my neighbours hand
and maybe then I'll understand
just what this thing that we call love
that must be sent from high above
we take too much and give none back
and expect the rest to take the slack
For too much pride and too much greed
please help us in our hour of need
A contest entry
- Describe The World by misticmoonlite.
575 points, ended January 5, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awesome poem! very sweet and gentle. your rhyming fit into it so well it was fun to read. it all flowed really well except line 11, it seemed to break the flow. but great job!
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Very inspirational. A wonderful message delivered with great flow and pleasant rhyme.
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i really like this write. it rhymed well and didnt seem forced. good work!
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dreams can come true
I wish for those dreams for you to come true, the way
life is today,grab ir and run as fast as you can
thank you for this entry,
good luck
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