I find myself thinking of you
Wondering when I will get to see your face
I continue to thirst for your blood
Since the last time I saw you
The experience we shared
That day in the middle of the night
The taste of your lips were amazing
Lusting for your blood
Sucking on your neck and
Slowly biting deeper into your skin
As the blood draw
I begin to drink the blood from you
I realize I can't stop wanting to take more from you
Because it's so irresistible and desirable
Your blood to me is like a drug
I want more and more
Until I couldn't have enough
It's so addictive and
I can't get enough of how delicious
Your blood truly taste
Author notes
Written - January 5,2009
Time - 5:04 p.m
Day - Monday
Emotion - Weird
Feeling - Sore
Tell me what you think 
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Omg! mm blood this reminds me of twilight :]
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I love blood too great poem
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Wow i LOVE IT its so awesome bloodlust and everything great write maria
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Thanks so much for the comment Bobby I am glad you like it
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No prob it is an awesome write good job
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Thursty...?
I love blood to
Its so AWEsome. Very well written. Nice!xD
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Yes I was. I wrote that in school. I love blood too
and thanks I am glad you liked it :]
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Welcome.
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Haha, great job darlin. Bravo on this write. Sorry it took so long to comment! I've been neglecting the reading list. But I promise to get better!
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This reminds me of Twilight, its great. -
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thanks so much for your comment
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Great Write
Love vampire poems, I have this awesome one I have written that I am waiting for a contest to enter it into. Until than, it is not going on the site, lol. Love this one though, really shows the vampiric hunger for their crimson nectar.
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Thanks so much for your kind comment. it means a lot to me. glad you enjoyed it
- Star Crossed Lovers ♥
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Wow great write! Truly vampiric!
I absolutely love this piece. Amazing flow and imagery, and I sense a true thirst behind this. I think we all have our own thirsts in life. Bravo!
♥ Kathraina
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Thanks so much for you amazing comment it really means a lot to me. I can see you seem to enjoy it very much. thank you for your kind words and for the applause.
and yes this is true everyone has their own thirst to go after.
- Star Crossed Lovers ♥
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This is amazing I love vampires this is so alike like bella and Edward in twilight anyway great write and I bet you do like blood
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Omg! this reminds me of twilight. I love this automatically. the flow is mwah and the poem itself is amazing. *highfive sissy*
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that was one amazing poem i love it the way u desribed the blood as if it was a drug so amazing
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this was different, i don't think you are talking literally about blood, i might be wrong but tyhats what i think.
this is an awesome poem, keep it up!
take care
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it is diffrent and yet diffrent is always good
alt of this reminds me of the twilight books
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Some parts remind me of Twilight. lol
The images you made in this are clear, and I can see them in my mind. Nice write.
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welp idk what this brotha Tiger can say about this write. you love blood you crave blood you go ga ga when you see the sight and smell of blood. in a way I guess I can figure out who you are missing then again sis I might be wrong. any ways this is a well penned poem and the concept to the pome is clear and precise. anyw ays kepe up the good work as always.
Brotha Tiger
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