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The House

The window in that house was always closed
And the front door
That showed all of the family positions was always open.
No one ever left the house, no one ever came
Except the newspaper, and then was recycled.
However no one dared to approach the house.
Some say that it was haunted,
Some say that they just did not have air conditioning.

Author notes

This is not a dark poem. Because personally, I feel like that is not terrific enough.

This poem is meant to be looked at closely and studied looking for metaphors and hidden meaning. If you are having trouble, look for reasons why a window would be closed and a door open etc....

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