Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Nightmare

Silent screams
Cold nights
Chills go down my spine
Memories of you
Leave me with a fright
Consuming my mind
Giving me nightmares
Through the night
Unable to sleep
Fear lies within my eyes
Beauty and passion is
What I hide deep inside
Wandering the earth surfaces
Trying to find my place
Trying to find a way out
Wanting to escape but
There's is no way out

Author notes

Written- January 5,2009
Time - 4:46p.m
Day - Monday
Emotion - Mixed
Feeling - sore
Tell me what you think =]

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5
  • I like this even tho. it's a little sad

  • Wolf Of Fire
    February 1
    Edit | Reply
    Awe. I am sorry you feel this way.


  • xXMizzPopularXx
    January 15

    Edit | Reply
    Awe this brings such sadness sissy but I understand where your coming from. I have nightmares too


  • Hope Angel silver member
    January 5

    Edit | Reply
    Awww I used to be terrafied of going to sleep, things I just wanted to forget would follow me. It sucks, to be afraid to fall alseep because of nightmares. Hope things getter better. ♥
  • well sis I must say this is another well penned write from ya and I find this kind of hauntingly scary mostly because I could understand and relate to this write a bit in my own little way least with the nightmare aprt that is. any ways its very well penned and quite wlel worded too. good pace and flow through out broken down line by line ebautifully. any ways nice work and as always kepe up the good work

    Brotha Tiger

1 - 5 of 5