Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

what's it feel like [[Editing!!]]

inadequate and lifeless
you're always dragging out
what you're never going to finish
then you turn to me
to drag me down beside you
falling hopelessly to our death



Author notes

Should I add onto this??
I can't think of anything to add..

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • james-1986
    February 4
    ?
    Edit | Reply
    then you turn to me, hardboil me, blaze me, and use me. idk


    • brittany lee
      February 4
      ?
      Edit | Reply
      I'll have to sit down and work with it one day. I might use your words in it (: