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wishing i was with you


Laying awake listening
for a whisper of your voice,
longing to have you close.
To have you here.

Alone.
seeking what i know is true
and finding it in side.

Holding your tender love to me,
basking in its wonderful warmth,
smiling at what i cant see,
but will always feel.


i love you

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this was born from spending to little time with the one i love and having to wait to long till i see him again,
i know its not much and is probably terrible but this is the closest iv come to describing what i feel and it still dose'nt come close enough.

love you dear heart

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  • kelbornro
    January 8

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    hmmmm i understand how you feel wish i was with you always my love. its a brilliant little poem even if it doesnt say all that you wish it too....love you hun

  • Poco Loco
    January 6

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    awww..its beautiful...how i feel countless of times about my love. it was short but held enough emotion and imagery to fill a whole 2 pages of writting. Keep writting coz u are amazing.
    Love u xxx