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Art of Existence

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Through the semblance of nature

you speak softly to the wind

The aura of your presence aware

makes the circle of being no end

 

Quietly you exist in turbulence alive

swaying with elements you survive

Living in the constant rays of light

staying, existing to all a delight

 

Bathed by the blithe air you commence

with one eye and a heart so profound

Reasoning through power of the senses

wild spirit of natures joy will surround

 

 

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transcendentalism

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  • jake x x x
    August 13
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    i like it the rhyme works really well and doesn't seem forced


  • ScarletO gold member
    January 17
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    Quietly you exist in turbulence alive

    swaying with elements you survive

    Living in the constant rays of light

    staying, existing to all a delight

    These are such soothing lines and how life is a beautiful turbulence and we must deal with them through our own way.

  • unraveled
    January 16
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    i must say your rhyme is pretty well done. it is imperfect but flows well. i like this line "living in the constant rays of light", it just brought nice imagery to mind. the last two lines are my other favorite section, i like the way you have phrased your truth.

    thank you for your entry,
    -cassidy


  • arafura gold member
    January 7

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    "Bathed by the blithe air you commence
    with one eye and a heart so profound
    Reasoning through power of the senses
    wild spirit of natures joy will surround"

    Very deep my friend. A great read!