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Journey

Missing image

Her lips, soft spoken, smooth to appease my curiosity,

as I hear earth’s angels mystic tune,

falling for you, for you are my oxygen, my sun, my moon.

 

Your wings flutter to the sum of twelve heartstrings as one,

where melodies seep ever so gently from my guitar,

save us from the war afar, love me tenderly, my shinning star.

 

I pray each night on bended knees, earth angel heal me please,

my loyalty lays beside the still waters of your soul,

you have custody of all my waking dreams and woes.

 

Washed in the river of your words divine,

cleansing my inner sanctum as your tongue circles round my own,

lead me to the inner freedom unknown.

 

Through the pathway of paradise called love

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  • Cynthia Gaines
    July 8, 2009

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    Congratrulations on the Silver Cup!!

    Beautifully sentimental romance to take her breath away!! Thank you for sharing your muse's passion. Well done, Poet!!
    Peace, luv & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Dixie Dawn
    June 23, 2009
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    I loved this, its wonderful, truly, written so well, and beautiful. One of my favs now!


  • ISeduceSilently
    April 17, 2009

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    I.LOVED.IT!

    execellent work,amazing poem,i so loved it.my favourite part was the last para and the line after.keep up the good work!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 17, 2009

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    Applause-Applause-Applause!

    I'm pretty sure....there was a resounding sea to sea
    mountain top to farthest height ....
    SWOON and sigh
    from everyone who had the pleasure of reading
    this fabulous tribute of a poem!

    My goodness....we all fall humbled
    once again.

    Applause-Applause-Applause.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 17, 2009

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    A wonderful piece that tends to the soul. A beautiful piece that mends the heart...for this piece allows one to believe there is such a thing called love...

    you have penned yet another magical piece.

    Thank you for sharing.

    Much love,
    Passionspromise


  • Kuranya gold member
    April 17, 2009

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    This is so beautifully captivating. I was left with a wish fore more of this piece. The gentle softness of romanticism was just beautiful. Congratulations on your silver fine poet


  • celisha
    April 16, 2009

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    Very romantic, sensual and yet erotic. Such a gentle poem. Beautifully written. Thanks so much for sharing.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 6, 2009

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    love it

    I love the way you put angels mystic tune. Stars and moon you go with the tune of music you hear. this is very lovely I love the way you talk about praying every night. It was a pleasure to read.


  • liltulip gold member
    February 6, 2009
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    lovely!

    and congrats on the silver!

  • patrick20traveler
    February 6, 2009
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    This is very romantic and sensual. Made me wish I was young again.


  • justgot2loveme
    January 19, 2009

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    very beautiful writing.
    this is simply sweet and touching.
    it speakes of real love.
    It really is a joy to read something so lovely.

    Justgot2loveme


  • kjack
    January 15, 2009

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    Stunning

    Wowzers, this is simply stunning. That is truly the stuff that love is made of. It is so hard to put down what love makes you feel, but you do it superbly. Don't ever stop loving, your love is your poetry. And your poetry is meant to be loved. It works well. I'm still a bit breathless.

    becca


  • Kalexi
    January 14, 2009

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    Lovely

    Timothy,

    this is so beautiful, your words paint the prettiest picture. you are so sweet.

    Love ya
    Karen


  • StarEyes
    January 14, 2009

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    Oh my! This could melt a girl's heart! This is truly beautiful! What a wonderful read this one is! You do have a way with words! One can feel the love in your words! Fantastic!


  • shipfingers
    January 11, 2009

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    I like how doting it is. There's something warm and moving about it all. Great job.

    ~J. Pronek

  • LovingPhoenix
    January 9, 2009
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    I really like your work as always it is very captivating.


  • Infinity21
    January 9, 2009

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    Very Nice

    I accidentally clicked on this, but boy am I glad I did. I usually don't read strictly love poetry; I like a little dark with my love. This was beautifully written, and made me want to go kiss my husband. The first sentences grabbed my attention immediately and sucked me in. I love the tender energy this inspires. Thanks!! I wish you luck in the contest that you have entered. This poem is a winner. I did have a little trouble reading some of the words though. I think that was due to the font style, or my old eyes one or the other.


  • ScottishPrincess silver member
    January 8, 2009

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    Wow I am sure happy I clicked on this,this is so beautiful and I found it a great pleasure to read!
    I think any man or woman would love to have something this beautiful penned for them
    Such a great masterpiece in my opinion,Regards,Hazel


  • Introvert2006
    January 8, 2009
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    Excellent Write, Pure Talent!


  • PurpleSky
    January 8, 2009
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    after reading the poems listed above yours in the most popular I am disturbed because this one by far should be at the top and the others above it frankly two of them completely suck lol. but hey thats just my opinion I suppose
    anyways on to this write you have certainly not disapointed me! it is beautiful just like your soul. Thanks for another awsome read worth reading
    Lena


  • weaverwonderland
    January 7, 2009

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    Love

    A careful detail of what love means to the one thats found it in his heart for her!! A beautiful poem. Love,
    Dad @ Mom xoxo


  • jeffob
    January 6, 2009
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    AWESOME.. LOVE THE IMAGERY.. AND THE INHERENT SADNESS THAT IS SOAKED IN EVERY WORD.. LAST LINE ROCK


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 6, 2009

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    What a beautiful journey for anyone to partake!
    Sweet brother mine, your heart speaks wonderfully and beautifully once more; I'm sure any woman (or man for that matter ) would love to hear these beautiful words spoken to them
    Good luck to you in this contest!
    Love ya!
    Sister Sandy


  • Veronica-Armijo
    January 6, 2009

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    Very Nice!

    Wow! I don't know what to say. This is such a beautiful piece. I look forward to reading some of your other pieces.


  • PurpleSky
    January 6, 2009

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    Sigh..............BEAUTIFULL

    Oh how much I love to read your work. I simply do not ever recall reading something of yours that has not profoundly spoken volumes not only to my heart but deep into my soul. It is so easy my brother to see Gods love in you and shine like a beacon in the night through each precious word you pen! In case I never told you, You are truely my all time favorite poet on this site. Mostly because over the years I have come to know you and your heart that have on so many dark days spread some sunshine back upon my life.
    THANK GOD FOR YOU!
    Be well and be blessed my dear friend and please keep that heart pouring out!
    ~Lena


  • Angelflower
    January 6, 2009

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    This was really beautiful. I love the imagery that you painted here with your words truly wonderful write! best of luck in the contest..

    Angel

  • Whispering Wind gold member
    January 6, 2009

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    BREATH TAKING

    Through the pathway of paradise called love...sighs...to be so lost within the arms, to be held so close within the dreams, to live and know the sweet magic of this wonderful gift called, LOVE na pet you amaze me I do love reading a good GOLD winner for sure...

     

  • lightwing
    January 6, 2009
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    A beautiful piece with such rich imagery and heartfelt emotion. Good luck in the contest.


  • Lonely
    January 6, 2009

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    Wow, thats a really beautiful poem. Such inspiring words! Beautifully Romantic.. I specially loved the way you concluded it Awesome.

    Hats off!
    Love,
    Lonely


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 6, 2009

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    Wow, this is just beautiful. I love how youw ere able to put in so much wonderful imagery without it seeming crammed. A perfect balance.
    An excellent piece.
    Best wishes in the contest
    Gaylene


  • Amera gold member
    January 6, 2009

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    Pure beauty in meter and imagery. This poem is not only pleasing to the soul but also to the eye with wonderful structure.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • kaibab silver member
    January 6, 2009

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    Such is the greatest miracle of life...the love of an earth angel...in the touch of one so close...we touch the wonder of all...wonderful poem brother


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 6, 2009

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    Wow! This is awesome and such a tender and
    beautiful read! I loved every line in this one.
    I do hope that you do well in this contest and
    thanks a lot for sending this my way! All the best
    to you and keep up the wonderful work here!
    Always a pleasure to read you!





    Jeremy0826


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    January 6, 2009

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    '...earth angel heal me please,"

    Your words play musically,
    lilting from the page,
    leading us to the pathway
    of paradise that you envison.

    Applauding softly to not dispell the mood...

    M-C


  • Katie Lazette
    January 6, 2009
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    Very well written Tim. Nice metaphors.


  • EeyoreUK
    January 6, 2009

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    the peace and traquillity of this piece is very strong. Such a magically thing, this thing called love


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    January 6, 2009

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    well what can be said other than this is a very nicely penned poem and I really love the whole depth and the portrayal of the poem through out. increidble clear flow reallty makes this an attractive write as well. also enjoyed the over all way you penned this. any ways just a very well penned poem as always bro and keep up the good work as always. Good Luck with the contest as this is a winnewr to me then again we are the ones who are tue winners having you share your poetry with us

    Brotha Tiger


  • Rinzu
    January 6, 2009

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    loved the beautiful imagery...and the way u described ur world...!!!




  • il terzo fratello
    January 6, 2009

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    awesome

    i really liked this poem, great ending and good rhyming through out. Could feel the emotion just pouring out of the words. Well Done.


  • soldiersoul gold member
    January 5, 2009

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    now that there makes me wanna take a drive down to lovers lane and unfog some windows bet that piece got the gals swoonin, Timbuk Good job!!! I'd whistle but I might take those gals away from ya I dont wanna steal yer thunder lol


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 5, 2009

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    You have picked up your pen and written from your heart as you always do..imagery is abundant as you weave your affectionate words throughout your moving write here...Charming how you so delicately share your feelings....A beautiful write...Worthy of top honors here!


  • Sacred Ground
    January 5, 2009
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    Gold!! Love ya.


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    January 5, 2009

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    Beautiful incorporation of what is human and what is divine. I love the tenderness of this and the way the rhyme falls softly as you read. A real beauty.


  • penman gold member
    January 5, 2009
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    Excellent

    Such a vivid and descriptive write. So truly creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • johnrwilfred2003
    January 5, 2009
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    A WELL WRITTEN POEM


  • Stormy Days
    January 5, 2009
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    This is good really really really good


  • Gods child40 silver member
    January 5, 2009
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    excellent

    excellent job


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 5, 2009

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    That is just lovely my dear!! Nice rhyme scheme here - it flows quite nice! The essence of love displayed is one of truth, adoration, and amorous devotion - very well spoken... with even a bit of steam to lace the end. Great write!!!


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 5, 2009

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    My dearest your words speak profoundly and touch the soul. May the shining light of love shine brightly evermore upon your wondrous spirit and erase the burdens and disdain in redemptions faith. you my rainbow always shine bringing forth such heartfelt and genuine smiles upon my own soul. well done with love and many blessings always xxxx


  • angelicverse
    January 5, 2009
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    I like it... very descriptive...


  • theredcatjazzoflove
    January 5, 2009

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    just lovely mushy i love this i think you did a very great excellent job with this here my friend good luck to you in the contest


  • storiesuntold
    January 5, 2009
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    Awesome piece here

    You have truly written this so perfectly and a lovely write it is


  • poetryrocksmysox
    January 5, 2009

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    Beautifully Crafted!

    This touches my very heart and soul.
    Through the pathway of paradise called love.
    What a beautiful way to complete a beautiful poem.

    Love ya, K.


  • Mariana
    January 5, 2009

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    Amazing....such beauty expressed in this poem. The picture complements it well. I love the analogy of nature being Love itself...because for me...they are one and the same. Bravo!

    Mariana


  • poeticpieces
    January 5, 2009

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    Amazing!

    Your words bring this site to a new level.
    I'm so proud of you, and how you can pen these styles.
    Your words flow so wonderfully, and leave me in awe!
    Thanks for sharing you, love ya dad, you totally


    poeticpieces.


  • Intricate Wordsmith
    January 5, 2009
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    By the way I forgot to mention that the picture compliments this poem very well and it is beautiful!


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 5, 2009
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    lost

    you won I was lost in your words, sublime write


  • Intricate Wordsmith
    January 5, 2009

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    This is breath-taking . . . I love the imagery that is present here. Well written! Brava, my dear poetic friend! "Washed in the river of your words divine" is my favorite line!


  • Denerica
    January 5, 2009
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    Outstanding...beautiful. Blessings.

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