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Intense Desire

And here is my heart
Presented blankly to you
I’m in love with yourself
And all that you do

Though you don’t feel the same
And I’ve realized the truth
One day you will know
And I will get you

Your eyes so bittersweet
And your hands bold and rough
Your lips and your touch
I just can’t get enough

You’ve played me again
And I feel just the same
And of course I come back
To you again and again

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  • tombruize
    February 13
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    Nice...

    Nice flow to this


  • jcat gold member
    January 5

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    And just how many of us have fallen prey to this kind of guy??? Too many of us unfortunately!! Very well done and I wish you luck here!!


  • Ademon
    January 5

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    This was truly a great read, and wanted to say thank you for sharing with us...


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 5

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    Well written poem here

    We do as our hearts tell us and often our hearts are hurt and damaged from lies from another not from ourselves but how another made us feel then turned away yet our hearts dreams of another day


    • HaileeDear
      January 7
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      your feedback is amazing. I love your outlook. You're so wise :]


  • firion
    January 5
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    amazing piece! love it! though i expected no less from you

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