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Change

sitting here thinking of you
wondering why you did that to me

for once i was crushing on you
for once i thought you cared

then i hear one thing
i talk to you about it
you fess up

a week later
you are denying it all

as i sit here and cry
i want some people
i wish some people

would just simply Change

Change for me
Change for yourself
Change because you want to

wondering what would happen if you did Change

if all of that you said
would that be said?
or would you take it like a man
and simply appoligize to me

but would you ever

Change

would you want to Change the way people saw you

i sure would like you to

Change

my heart cracks everytime you stab me in the back
my heart cracks everytime you talk about me behind my back

i want to be with you
but my heart can only take so many cracks be before it breaks

Change

so i can call you mine

Change

so the world can see the good in you

Change

so you can enjoy your life

i am sitting in my room
i am crying my eyes out
i wish you will just Change
in the back of my head
i know you won't
Change is too much to ask

'cause waiting for you to Change
is like waiting for relief from our recession

please CHANGE


Author notes

well here is another poem written about a guy who messes with my heart but what is different about this person is that all he wants to do is continue to stab me in the back one minute and be a sweetheart the next i guess i got tired of playing his games and i got tired crying about him he is too much of a stress and i wish he would just Change so i can continue to get to know him.... we will see how bad he wants to get to know me

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 8

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    Oh honey this is sad

    Believe me when I tell you that you cant change someone from what they want to be .Sure they may have moments when you feel they are changeing for you but ask yourself what are they really doing are they playing with your mind . Move on honey and leave him behind for what you see now will be him years from now if not with you it will be with another and she will be crying from being hurt by his ways .He wont see it untill it is turned around on him for one day he will find that perfect person he wants forever and she will turn the tables on him and he will know of this pain he causes to others who loved him . Change they never change often it is the women that end up giving up their way of life to just be with them and that is too sad


    • luckypoet7
      January 8
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      thanks for the adivce... actually since i wrote this poem ( he never read it ) i have moved on from him and removed him from every part of my life... he wasnt good enough anyways... thanks again

  • wow a lot of emotion went into this one!!! i like it.
    this guy most likley wont change and there are tones more out there. think of tyler for example.....hint hint ha ha. anyways great poem!! your not suppost to play their games they're suppost to play yours


    • luckypoet7
      January 5
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      yea right

      umm NO to tyler he is more anoying than any thing.... i mean comon seriously