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Put You In It

Dare you bring me, no you?
why are you repainting love?
the insult/injury view
this cometh not from above.

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  • individuality gold member
    April 3

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    a good piece - ah the darker side here of love, a flick of paint on older times, flakes of sighs slip to the floor.


  • second-born
    January 16

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    I think this is lovely with such a good vibe in it...but the 1st line has only 6 syllables...otherwise...this is nice...thank you for participating in my contest!