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Finally

Self surrender is the key
willful denial it be
seen as the sky falling tree
eclipsed of intensity

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  • individuality gold member
    May 22

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    aye to self surrender - as long as we fight the self then strife will flutter madness in our lives, and eveything will become intense. a good poem.


  • second-born
    January 16

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    indeed...we would 'finally' experience freedom if we 'self-surrender''...thank you for sharing your poem!