Teeming Rain
Drenching Clothes
Clinging
To Clammy Soft
Skin
Author notes
Prompt:
Soaking Rain
9 words
I do not clain this picture used with this write as my own. Picture found on google images.
A contest entry
- 9 words... try me :D by Lady Michaella.
490 points, ended January 13, 2009, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah, yes. A delightful piece that in so few words was able to say so much. A very sensual piece that got me smiling. Well done indeed.
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Few words, with a powerful feeling. Definitely gets the point across.
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u need to teach me how u write so good. great piece
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Oh yeah baby
now that's what I call sexy!
I knew I loved the rain for some reason.
Loved the visuals aswell as the stunning
words that evokes so much passion
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hot and steamy
you had me with the picture ,nice imagery.
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mmmmm...
sometimes wet is so..nice!!
good stuff my friend! lots of luck in the contest..
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Very nice candy girl, you can make it steamy with only nine words.
Best wishes in the contest
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this is beautiful, especially with all the imagery in it
wonderful job.
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gone head dammit you cuttin up with your lil prompts huh now this was marvelous and your own sound i love it honey awww good luck in the contest
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Well done. Very enjoyable. I can only imagine what 90 words would have been like....
Mike
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Whew!
Wow, this is hot. You can do so much with so few words. Best of luck in the contest.
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great nine words!
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Nice, short and sooo sweet!! I love your words. Great job! good luck.
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Wowzers~
You know You could so jam on Haikus- for Your short pieces have Excellent brevity~
and pack a punch- Powerful message
Bravo!
Love the image too
and words: clammy soft
-looks outside for rain-
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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