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Moonwashed Night

He watches over his pack,
as they climb the snow covered hills
canter through the stream bed
just beginning to fill
Shades on the Horizen
fill them with peace
their hunger dies down
as their minds wander
along with their paws.

He watches over his pack,
pride fills his being,
the cubs stay close to mothers,
as darkness looms forth.
On to someplace safe
where He leads,
Howling,
They follow him,
Running off into the shadowed-
Pale, Moonwashed night.


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Wolves...
Ok, Definetly not my best by far, but considering the fact that I was dealing with my kids, trying to fix lunch, and yelling at my cats, I think I did an Ok Job. LOL! Hope you enjoyed

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  • LilEmoPrincess
    January 5

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    Lol i think you did an amazing job considering you had all that to deal with! well done its a great write and gd luck in my contest