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Timeless

A step
A sound
A creak
A round

A river bend through time it runs
The gushing water of its timless smile
Draws me in

A splish
A splash
A hop
A dash

A fishing tale is seen for seconds
The glimmering scales
Shine in the sun

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  • Great I feel like I'm there, lovely poem


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 5
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    Great work here

    Being I love to fish I could near vision the track across the rivers edge


  • HaileeDear
    January 5
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    ahh, this is so cute. i got great imagery, and thats my favorite :]
    amazing work.


  • StarEyes
    January 5

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    Sounds like it would be fun to me! What a great read! Now if I can find time to enjoy some of these things...

    Best of luck in this contest!


  • Denerica
    January 5
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    I need time to enjoy all that, nice write.

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