His full arms, well they beg me to stay
While the stars begin to sweep me away
Damn, his eyes, they are too endless seas
As my water begins to rise and run down my cheeks
Baby, where did you go?
So far out upon the sea
When are you coming home to me?
Darling, why did you leave?
Himself and I is all that I know
The sea calls my name and so I must go
While he lays there asleep I slip out the door
I had to leave as hes left before
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..Amazing, truly it is.
I love how its not set at revenge but a personal way of dealing.
How you need to get away like he once did.
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Well girl, now that was a bit of tit for tat wassn't it, but eh, the temptation from revenge is a feasible reason, nice little write, thank you, titus
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thanks
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awww what a lovely write!! beautiful imagery, i wish i could write like this!!! great job at capturing the audience's attention through such emotional lines <33
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well thanks!
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I pictured this as I was reading it. Good job girl! Keep up the good work. My all time favorite line was the first line.
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thanks hon!
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beautifully written, the imagery was heartfelt and wonderfully crafted, the gentleness here really reached out and grabbed the reader.. beautiful.. Thank you very much for sharing..
Angel
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<3
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I absolutely LOVE the first paragraph. "While the stars begin to sweep me away ... As my water begins to rise and run down my cheeks." Such beautiful imagery, I love it my darling
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thank you dear! you're so sweet, as always <3
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