Just because of you
In my heart, I feel blessed
When I look into your heart
Its exactly like finding chest
A treasure chest filled with
All sorts of amazing things
Things you would never
Find in a cedar chest
Because inside
A cedar chest you will
Only find second best
Verses those found
In the heart are
Nothing but the best
The treasures I see
Before me, have captured
My heart,by all there beauty
There sparkle out shining
The stars in all there glory
So In this, I whisper softy
That I am now totally speechless
Cause my heart beats in an uproar
With every turn inside your heart
The amazement leaves me
Wanting to expore more
The warmth of love in my heart
Is now over flowing, can it be
That I have falling in love at last!
A contest entry
- Just Because ( I want to ) by justgot2loveme.
1790 points, ended January 19, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely write here
Indeed just because we want to so let it be this is a wonderful write you have penned here
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you repeated heart, chest, best, plenty, and that was kind of annoying. but when i got to the 5th and 6th stanza i enjoyed it. i got imagery and i felt like this piece really came from the heart. nice work.
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