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Mayn't I Ask One Question, Please?

Its so uncanny
the way your laughter
lites a fuse in me.

One brush against your person
serves a year's worth of intensity.
So undeniable this oceanic love.

How'd you garner
or rope my heart without a string?
Who gave you my key? what does it all mean?

Now I am like fodder
just awaiting your next touch.
Sometimes I'm smothered with loving you so much.

You've opened doors inside of me
I never knew existed.
Your elegance and smarts are vanilla/chocolate twisted.

In ways beyond exceptions
I'm lost inside my thoughts of you.
So strange for me, this being all entirely new.

Need I wonder
how this plays out on your end?
Need I question;  whether foe or friend?

The depths of me
have been impacted now by your own
and I am shades past midnight-into the Sun's bright dome.

When one is ravished
can they still exist?
this is my question, now can you answer it?

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 5
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    Great work here

    I loved the way you penned this poem it is delightful indeed


  • Denerica
    January 5

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    Cleverly written...my answer would be um, as long as there is breath. so breathe and start over again. Blessings.