Its so uncanny
the way your laughter
lites a fuse in me.
One brush against your person
serves a year's worth of intensity.
So undeniable this oceanic love.
How'd you garner
or rope my heart without a string?
Who gave you my key? what does it all mean?
Now I am like fodder
just awaiting your next touch.
Sometimes I'm smothered with loving you so much.
You've opened doors inside of me
I never knew existed.
Your elegance and smarts are vanilla/chocolate twisted.
In ways beyond exceptions
I'm lost inside my thoughts of you.
So strange for me, this being all entirely new.
Need I wonder
how this plays out on your end?
Need I question; whether foe or friend?
The depths of me
have been impacted now by your own
and I am shades past midnight-into the Sun's bright dome.
When one is ravished
can they still exist?
this is my question, now can you answer it?
A contest entry
- Just Because ( I want to ) by justgot2loveme.
1790 points, ended January 19, 24 entries
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Comments
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Great work here
I loved the way you penned this poem it is delightful indeed

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Thank you so much lol
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Cleverly written...my answer would be um, as long as there is breath. so breathe and start over again. Blessings.


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I love how you look at things, thanks for your review of this one, lol
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