Lucid Illusions
In My Subliminal Mind
Of
Fool's Paradise
Author notes
Prompt:
Dreaming of you
I do not claim this picture used with this write as my own. Picture found on google images.
A contest entry
- 9 words... try me :D by Lady Michaella.
490 points, ended January 13, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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whoa
zen-like use of space and i love the surreal mystery you create of the how real your paradise is in the illusion. that's some dreaming you're doing. i like -
Wow
Amazing word choice. That is some dream land. Best of luck in the contest. -
Love your words! Great take on the prompt and picture. Good luck!
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Nice..
a very cerebral piece that soothes
the soul and embraces the imagination.
would've liked to have read more.
as this enchanted write left me wanting
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Beautiful and thought provoking. Beautiful background and tag as well.
Best wishes in the contest
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this is so beautiful. even the background is amazing. this poem makes total sense to me, and is done brilliantly.
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Beautiful
Oh my you sure painted a fantastic image with this one. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow~
Oh My Word- this one packs a punch~ Powerful piece penned and done so in 9 Words
Excellent~ Woot!!
Love the reference to *Fool's Paradise*
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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