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Captivated

Gazing at the moonlight
all she does is think of you

Captivated by your voice
that lulls her to slumber

 

she whispers
'I love you '

Deep inside she knows
that this love is forever

 

As it grows for you,
there is no need for denial


A moment shared by
two lovers whose bodies

became one, the night
that they made love

Intensity arose from within

soft tender touches
on ivory skin

Deep desires
turned up the flames

of love’s secret.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 7

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    The passion of true love, beautifully expressed hunni. A gorgeous write


  • MysticalRayne gold member
    January 6
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    This is beautifully written my dear


  • KayJay
    January 6
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    What a beautiful and loving write... this is truly one from the heart... Exquisite.
    Ken


  • maralisa silver member
    January 5

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    wow sis this just a divine romantic poem I loved it from stanza one through to the last thank you for sharing your beautiful poem sis sis


  • thejollytinker
    January 5

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    Many beauties in this write, fuzz. Shoot me later, but you might change 'who's' to 'whose.' I'm ducking.... Ly, Gresh


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 5

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    Beautiful
    Gentle and loving
    Brings a heart and the touches to life
    Much love
    Mum x


  • Angelflower
    January 5

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    This is really beautiful. I love the emotion and passion here.. it's suitable and soft.. a wonderful write! You did a good job sissy I likes it..

    Angel
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