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winter's frozen breath
chilling whispers follow me
winds of hollow change

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winter haiku

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  • Malabu
    February 2

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    winter's frozen breath
    chilling whispers follow me
    winds of hollow change

    you might want to try modern ku

    winter's breath
    chills follow me
    thoughts of sping

    thanks for your entry


  • DogFish silver member
    January 17
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