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Just Because {I Want To}

So young and afraid,
it's so hard for kids today.
Pier pressure and styles proceed,
the true life kept from me.

I dream of friends and joy abound,
yet their is only tears and sorrows found.
Lost in a world  so unsure you see ,
I have lost my best friend
and my best friend was me.

Just because I want to,
I will turn my life around.
Just because I want to,
I am gonna turn this frown around.
Just because I want to,
bring that friend I know so true.
Just because I want to,
I will embrace that friend within
and find a new muse .

No more locked within my room,
listening to records of gloom and doom.
No more cutting or drugs
for in my new life there is no room.
No more cursing I will trade them
for a hug a loving embrace,
and let that friend within
have a smile on his/her face.

Just because I want to,
my life will be set free.
Just because I want to,
I will help myself see.
That the life I am so living
was brought forth
to please others indeed ,
Just because I want to
today I will please me. 

Author notes

So embrace that friend within .Let that friend be loved and happy for once you find happiness within yourself then nothing and nobody can pull you down . And the world will shine with such muses for you each day .
If you would like to talk to me about this poem please do so I am one crazy lady that so loves to enjoy life and if others dont find what I like amuzing well thats ok but that doesnt mean I am going to change to please them I am me and me is my very best friend that will see me through anything in life

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 5

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    great

    You have a wonderful piece of work here. Boy I can totally identify with this. I am glad you wanted to. You know The readings has been about healing today. It was a pleasure to read.


  • afroqban
    January 7
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    had to give u three more, u moved me just that much

  • afroqban
    January 7

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    MOVING

    again, you have touched me when i am at my lowest in moods right now. well done and much love and respect to you


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 6

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    very good

    message and sweet story my friend, and just because i want to..here's a for you being so wonderful..


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 5

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    A wonderful message friend.
    Thanks for sharing here, peace.

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Olivias Violin
    January 5
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    I really like the message here

  • sleepinglion
    January 5

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    outstanding

    If we can judge ourselves and forgive ourselves our little foibles as easily as we do other peoples that would be a step in the right direction.
    In Fact.
    Judge not lest ye be judged!!!
    A very powerful poem which I shall try to incorporate subliminally, (I love long words beginning with S). It was Serendipity that brought me to your poem.
    Here is a quote to Synchronize with your poem, -

    Be who you are and say what you feel,
    Because those who mind don't matter,
    And those who matter don't mind


  • maralisa silver member
    January 5
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    wonderful patty we are all capable of embraching ourselves from within we are all unique and have the responsabilies to choose how we feel with no control of others draging us down good luck inthe contest my friend with your wonderful words of encouragement and growth maralisa


  • Denerica
    January 5

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    Amen

    To love one another and especially this generation is the one that has to rise up. I noticed for peer you have pier. Nice flow to the Just Because. Losing yourself as your best friend was clever. Blessings.


  • StarEyes
    January 5

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    UPLIFTING!!!

    What a wonderful read this one is! I love it! I love the outlook you take on this one! It is fantastic! What a great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • upperworld06
    January 5

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    I have lost my best friend
    and my best friend was me.
    that's awesome, i like in the AN where you said you won't change to please ppl, i agree with you, BE YOURSELF NOT WHAT OTHERS WANT YOU TO BE

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