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&& now I'm [pretending to be] alone with my b r e a k d o w n s &hearts

Baby you stole the breath right out of my breakdown lungs.

I was a crumpled doll on the linoleum;;
you were my [[everything.]]


tell me baby pretty baby that this house is not a graveyard.
Tell me how to stay strong and carry you home.


You’re starting to get  i m p a t i e n t
and I’m starting to get t.i.r.e.d.
of all of your demands, pulling me to my feet && slamming me down hard & asking the only things you know I could never [want to] give [anyone but] you.
live fast | fall hard


be my shattered scarred-arm prince. I’ll be your heroine whore and we can play make-believe as I try to w r i g g l e out of your embrace and you try to take the story in the direction you want it
(the direction of the nearest bedroom and love we’re going 
d
     o
         w
              n .)

every xx night


you want me forever
                                I want far away.
you want… *that*
                                    I want to run away.
you want me to trust you
                                         I want to fall for your lies.


So I fall for you [[& your falsehoods]] over and over again,, and you touch my neck (& other places) every time you see me shudder at your proximity. And just keep soothing away all my fears, 'cause I could never keep my thoughts straight for too long. Love, once upon a nightmare I made myself your {{w|h|o|r|e}} & promised you [whatever you want] for e t e r n i t y.


Call me in(love) or in(fatuated) or in(secure). Just keep lying to me baby and I’ll keep lying down in your bed to be & do whatever.you.want. Obsession makes me want to be yours forever, and the sound of your voice makes me do [anything] for you.




Bby remember I love you forever, and just please don’t break me again

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  • Well, you know, I would try to pick a favorite part...but it's impossible.
    Elegant, pain filled, beautiful.

  • The pain resonates off the page
    You can feel the heartbreak

    Well penned


  • loveangerbeauty
    February 2

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    this poem literally hurts me to read, it is so accurate to what i've been going through, and you put so much emotion into it.

    it is a beautifully sharp poem


  • xxSerendipityxx
    January 26

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    This poem is really amazing, great write and I wouldn't change it a bit..... My favorite part is
    "the only things you know I could never [want to] give [anyone but] you.
    live fast | fall hard"

    I really liked the way you did the parenthesses and all.


  • Sir Squigglim
    January 23
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    **breath was taken away**

    I reallly like, don't change it.

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