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Sissy?

cold eerie desolate hallways
nightly visitors walk the lonely
path from here to hell & back
endlessly searching for all eternity

lost souls are what they are
looking for something they lost
many many years ago
or perhaps it was something
they severely lacked

a bone chilling mist
sweeps on by, frightening
all the children
standing watching
in horror as they pass on by

can’t be touched, sometimes
they can’t be seen
but unlike some
I really do believe

I saw her last night
yet again, roaming
these halls, she claimed
them as her own

I know for a fact
it wasn’t her fault
she always
comes back


I tried to help her
and warn her
don’t you know

sissy it’s daddy’s
fault you see
he’s the one who
hurt you, made you

cry until you literally
died inside.
I know you couldn’t
take it anymore

but they blamed you
just the same
daddy wouldn’t confess
to things he’d done.

 

 

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 7

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    This is haunting, aching and moving.
    The words are brilliantly crafted into a painful story that makes you stop and listen

    Shari
  • a powerful and haunting look at such a tragedy
    very well penned

  • maralisa silver member
    January 5

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    aw sis I can so relate to your words in this poem resinating the creal reality of abuse so vividly good luck in the contest sissis


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 5

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    Oh my! Very sad and powerful words for
    this picture. What a terrible position to find
    yourself in. You did a wonderful job with this
    story. Your words are very deep. Well done
    sis and thanks for sharing it with me!




    Jeremy0826


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    January 5

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    That's sad, hon'. I always liked the idea of spirits...though it's also scary to think that evil ones may exist. Creeps me out. A good write here.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 5

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    Oh Kat
    This one is again deep and throws a hard message that only those who have been abused can see within it.
    Brilliant
    Much love Mum x


  • Angelflower
    January 5
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    wow. thats amazing.
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