Tongues Tangle
Between Soft Lips
Of Two
Passionate Lovers
Author notes
Prompt: Kiss
9 words
The pictures used with this write I do not claim as my own. Pictures found on yahoo images.
A contest entry
- 9 words... try me :D by Lady Michaella.
490 points, ended January 13, 2009, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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summed up my kisses
hehe beautiful wording. curious, i counted syllables and you're short four for a haiku so it's cool challenge that you did had to do it in less -
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It was a 9 word contest not a haiku. Thanks for your read and comment though
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Oh My Word~
How did I miss this one
Holy Moly- Brevity in 9 words- and the Heat radiates off the page- Woot
Love the direction You took with this prompt~
Picture compliments too~
Your borders are top notch!!
Excellent~
Keep that quill dancing Beautiful~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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You're killing these words hon! I love this! Good luck!
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Yessss!
no fair! Now I want to kiss.
How pleasurable this condense piece
of passionate poetry was.
Invoking yearning and romance found
in the power of a kiss.
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you do haiku
so well, it's like this is your own personal form..
very nice imagery lady, and mmmm..kisses what could be nicer?
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Wonderful, very sensual write sweetie.
Best wishes in the contest
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i love this. so sensual and light. is written very well.
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Excellent
Wow, nine words the steam the mind. So amazing. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very nice Hotchocolate. Love your picture and your name too. Good luck in the contest.
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Well done. Nine passionate words.
Mike
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