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Countdown to Judgement

People walk through town
With little worry
None scream in fear
Of the dangers lurking ubiquitously
The streets are not covered in soot
Or in ash whose stench blocks fresh air
Corpses do not wither away, in public
Leaving scraps for the dying
People do not think 
To dread the apocalypse, our inevitable extirpation
But wait, what see we here
A young girl sits
She contemplates
And writes a poem
Of our impending demise

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YAY WORLD ENDING!

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  • xLovingxMyxAngelx
    January 6
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    awesomeness I love poems about the worlds demise


  • greatperhaps
    January 6
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    hahhahaahahaa


    • stuckinabottle
      January 6
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      why are you so nice????

      • greatperhaps
        January 6
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        was that sarcastic??? I was laughing that the world demise... I really like that poem, it's funny and very "The Road" esque... the corpses in the streets and all that... I am going to get some points for this comment hopefully... soooo go read my poetry and tell me if I should enter it into litmag... thanks!