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Run



Footsteps.

closer
CLOSER
CLOSER

I run
but stumble.

Blood.

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Prompt 13 - Evil Follows..

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  • Hikari Lady
    January 6

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    Liked how you bloded 'Closer' made it look more powerful and gave a feeling of intense. Great write. Good luck in the contest.

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • Lady Michaella
    January 5

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    AAAH
    this is 'bloody' brilliant. you write so excellently. i felt the tension here, i felt i was there. that doesnt happen often.
    x


  • Ademon
    January 5

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    Wow, great take on the prompt...didn't see the last bit coming... and knowing my long lanky legs I would stumble and fall...and scrape my knee...just my luck