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It's So Cold.

I turn and watch
As the tables spin
And lone chairs sit in the breeze.
It's so cold.

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  • Walk-Free
    January 7, 2009

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    "And lone chairs sit in the breeze."

    i felt that this poem was a reverse of what it should be.

    the ending was weak, but the beginning and the body was amazingly written.

    thanks and all the best


  • Scyphon
    January 6, 2009
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    Short and very interesting
    so many thoughts flood my mind from this
    I like it, well done ^_^


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 6, 2009
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    I like this

    but you must live some where warm, as that pictures looks like divine weather to me


  • storiesuntold
    January 5, 2009

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    Interesting write here

    I invision a patio out on the backside of a beachhouse beckoning the owners to come out yet the cold winter breeze pushes themm back in