charge: mental abuse
juries verdict: guilty
gavel slams
sentence: life with misery
Author notes
Stop this crap, before it takes your soul completely. Hold my hand, as I walk with you. Forever by your side
A contest entry
- Guilt (prewrites welcome) by Danna Hobart.
400 points, ended January 18, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very powerful words xx
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Thanks, I got the outcome I was after on this one....
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You certainly captured a moment with this. You said a lot with very few words. Well done. Thank you for entering.
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thankyou so much Donna.. I appreciate your words..
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Short and to the point. I love the power! Good luck.
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thanks Mo... this one needed true force behind it to get my point accross...
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GG - Nice one. Here are some suggestions: Consider "verdict" or "juries verdict" for juries decision; I think there is room for another line either before or after "gavel slams" and the rhythm supports it.
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GG - Nice one. Here are some suggestions: Consider "verdict" or "juries verdict" for juries decision; I think there is room for another line either before or after "gavel slams" and the rhythm supports it.
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ta Bruce... I like juries verdict better
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wow.
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hmmmmmm yer girl.... I can think of a few more words I said...... l.o.l
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This is powerful. Nice.
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thanks babe...
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oh boy..
pretty much the title says it all -
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hmmm it was supposed to get to the point....
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