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Kiss

Dark eyes closed
Tender lips touching
Life has changed.

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Sorry if it may not be to your standards, but a 13 year old child can't write that perfectly. =)

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  • Lady Michaella
    January 5

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    ooo
    hehe, im only 14, i dont really understand kissing yet either, so dont worry, cuz this is portrayed beautifully. well done
    xx