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Scattered Thoughts.

Moonlit gaze illuminates the craters of my dark
soul.

~~~~~~~Artis

A contest entry

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  • daviscth silver member
    January 14

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    You did an amazing job with the imagery in this short piece. Congratulations on your win of the silver cup.


  • doolie gold member
    January 13
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    Nice write. Congrats on the silver trophy.


  • Lady Michaella
    January 5

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    this is beautiful. i guess u can count 5 entries all in one, because each are different lines and prompts. this really is a wonderful poem, but it would be preferred if you made each entry separate.
    xx


  • sunflower.
    January 5
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    This is very visual, kind of Fitzgerald-esque. It's good.