sunburned ass
golden orb scorches
a nudist colony
A contest entry
- Contemporary Haiku by Harrisham Minhas.
525 points, ended January 21, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ha ha...love it !!!
Very funny.
Congrats on the Bronze.
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oh mys! that is a little too much for me on a sunday night. But it's amusing nonetheless and got you a trophy
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Loved it!
Simplistic and very funny! -
Yes, this reads forwards or backwards! Well done on the bronze
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Thanks for your entry:
"sunburned ass
golden orb scorches
a nudist colony"
Well, this is funny.
It's different and has been wonderfully-crafted.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
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This is very interesting. I think you could read it backwards with interesting effect.
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been looking at some of your work .. you've got a nice way of getting to the point and sometimes your words flow like an ax through mud on the way up to gosh knows where ... but pretty fast and right on target ... it is a good thing to be good poet, yes?
total!!!
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thank you. you're certainly right about that.
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great haiku...very unique and clever...lol.
thanks for the read btw
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You have to try everything once
Your subject matter reveals truth. We cannot write what we are not aware of. I sold a Mobile Home to a "Nudist" once and he ansewered the door naked. I asked him to get dressed and re-open the door." By the way Excellent Haiku"...
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ahaha. joe, you would.
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ok. youre just being ridiculous now.
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hahah loved this. pretty funny and a good write!
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Hahahahaha! That is so cute. I get this owie feeling from it, though, I burn easily myself.
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uhhh...*ahem, ahem* creative piece!
♥ Kathraina -
LOL oook
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LOL, while I do love some nakedness, I am so not comfortable enough to show my ass to the world.
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lol wtf!
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I love the title And the haiku even more! This one's a winner! Haha. You are very,very clever Mister!
Love and best wishes,
Ylova
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