Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Vanilla Sky

Frosted cream,
moonlight gleam,
snow forever in my dream.

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • daviscth silver member
    January 14

    Edit | Reply
    This is a beautiful poem and I'm happy you won gold with it. Congratulations. You deserved it.


  • doolie gold member
    January 13
    Edit | Reply
    Very nice write. Congrats on the gold trophy.


    • Yy13
      January 14
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks doolie. It was a fun contest and I enjoy the challenge of writing these short poems.


  • Lady Michaella
    January 5

    Edit | Reply
    wow
    now THIS is excellent. i seriously love this... seriously..