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Melting Dreams

Melting dreams,

falling
        as
              the
                  stars

of our
eternity.

Author notes

For a 9 word contest, using the word prompt "melting dreams".

A contest entry

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  • StarEyes
    January 25

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    Hmmmmmm, what a wonderful image you show in this one... One that makes me melt... This is great! I love it!

    Congrats one the HM!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • serenity silvermoon
    January 23

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    now this was short but it says so much and you show imergry great job on the trophy great pic to keep on writing you are great at it


  • daviscth
    January 14

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    Congratulations on your HM. I really like the picture and your words are perfect for it. The imagery is wonderful.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 13

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    Imagery great...luv....Keep penning...Congrats on the honorable mention!Auntie


  • doolie gold member
    January 13
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    Very nice. Congrats on the HM.


  • tamborine
    January 10

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    Brilliant

    In just a few short words, so much is said.
    You really showed what a great poet you are.....
    All the best


  • johnrwilfred2003
    January 6
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    A BEAUTIFUL POEM


  • insideinsanity
    January 5
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    A stunner.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 5

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    excellent~

    Really like the way you worded this poem
    And also the way you stair stepped it down like it was melting or falling
    Best of luck in the contest and nice to meet you
    I thought about entering this contest but dunno lots of good ones here including this one.........
    Again good luck...nice to meet you and hope you come visit me
    Susan~~~


    • Sunkissed xo
      January 6
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      Aww thank you Susan!
      Oh but I'm sure you are a brilliant poet - you should still try to enter! I'd love to read your entry .
      Lovely to meet you too. I will certainly visit your page!


  • Lady Michaella
    January 5

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    wow katie, thi8s is excellent,in such short words.. AMAZING job
    xx

  • Xx-Erin-xX
    January 5

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    Good write. Short and sweet. I love it. It is hard to have a favorite and least favorite part in a poem this short but it is good.

    Keep writing.

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