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French Cafe

We met over coffee

I loved you
Still do.

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For a contest with a 9 word limit.

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  • daviscth silver member
    January 14
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    This is such a romantic nine words and I can feel the emotion in them. Congratulations on the HM.


  • Lady Michaella
    January 5
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    oo

    i love this.  is more then just a poem... it tells a story. well done.